BEC高级商务写作的范文2_BEC高级

    report writing ex 4: sample answer: (235words)  
    reassessment of job satisfaction: sue pearson(pr dept.)
    introduction
    this report sets out to use workset colours to assess the accuracy of my job description as pr officer and to suggest a number of changes.
    findings
    it is clear that there is a difference between the way the company views the job and the reality as i perceive it. firstly, a number of areas which demand a significant proportion of my time are not mentioned in the official job brief. the segment on the pie chart which provides most cause for concern is the pink sector; this relates to my attendance at a number of meetings which i can contribute little. another significant area is the grey segment; this refers to the unscheduled time i spend sorting out computer problems. i feel these activities are hampering my core work. as can be seen from the pie charts, the time i spend actively working to meet the goals agreed with my line manager is less than envisaged.
    conclusions
    the above discrepancies clearly indicate that my current job brief is inaccurate.
    recommendations
    i would recommend that my official job brief should be updated using the workset colours. it would also be valuable to consider the proportion of non-core colours in the pie chart and to investigate whether work in these areas could be carried out by someone else more suited to these tasks.