医药论文英文摘要中的常见错误与评改_医学论文写作方法

  1、医药科技工作者撰写医药论文时一般要求附英文摘要，英文摘要写得准确与否，很大程度上体现了作者的学术水平，也与论文的影响力有很大关系。我们有幸从《医药导报》杂志社获取了相当数量论文的英文摘要原稿。该刊特邀英文校译——同华中科技大学同济医学院冯新为教授，年逾九旬仍伏案笔耕，为这些稿件做了大量细致深入的校译工作，可谓句句汗水字字珠玑。给医药科技摘要的写作提供了一个范本，对广大医药科技工作者来说也是一次极其珍贵的学习机会。本刊特辑录刊载其原文及冯教授所作修正、点评，以飨读者。2、编制体例：本文按照原文、修正、点评次序编写；修改、插入处以黑体斜体，删节处附括号说明，如有点评附上标数字注明。1、 原文：determination of gallic acid in zhixueting liquids by tlc scanningzhou qun1, xu la-ying2 (1. department of pharmacology, tongji medical college, huazhong university of science and technology, wuhan 430030, china; 2.the faculty of pharmacy, hubei college of traditional chinese medicine, wuhan 430061,china)abstract objective: to determine the content of gallic acid in zhixueting liquids. methods: zhixueting liquids were dissolved by distilled water, and then extracted into the sample with butanal etc. the samples were determinated by tlc scanning (λs=280nm,λr=350nm). result: the average recovery rate was 96.36% and rsd=2.39%. the contents of gallic acidin 3 five batches of samples were 0.38,0.42 and 0.47mg/ml. conclusion:the method is simple, convenient and available.key words tlc scanning; zhixueting liquids; determination; gallic acid修正：determination of gallic acid in chuxueting1 oral liquids by tlc scanningzhou qun1, xu la-ying2 (1. school of pharmacy2, tongji medical college,huazhong university of science and technology, wuhan 430030, china; 2.the faculty of pharmacy, hubei college of traditional chinese medicine,wuhan 430061,china)abstract objective: to determine the content of gallic acid in chuxueting oral liquids. methods: the chuxueting oral liquid was dissolved in distilled water, and then extracted （into the sample删去） with water-saturaled n-butanol3 etc. for the preparation of samples. the samples were subjected to gallic acid determination by tlc scanning (λs=280nm,λr=350nm). results: the average rate of recovery was 96.36%,（and删去） rsd=2.39%. the contents of gallic acid in 3 （five删去） batches of samples were 0.38,0.42 and 0.47mg/ml respectively. conclusion: the method is simple, convenient and feasible.key words tlc scanning; chuxueting oral liquids; determination; gallic acid点评：1、zhixueting 应为“止血停”而非“出血停”，自相矛盾。“出血停”也可译为hemorrhage-stopping，以方便国外读者理解。2、school可作“（大学里的）院”解，原意是“药学院”，而非“药理教研室”，故改之。3、斜体n表示“正”。2、原文：content determination of emodin in qingre mingmu capsulesluo ming-zhu1, zhang hong2 (1.hubei provice institute of drug control, wuhan 430030, china; 2.the 75310 medical team of the army)abstract objectives: to determination content of emodin in qingre mingmu capsules. methods: tlcs was used, silica gel tlc plate, developing solvent was benzene-ethyl fermate-formic acid-methanol-water(3:1:0.05:0.1:0.5) of which the upper solutionλs=435nm,λr=530nm. result: the linear relationship of sample application which ranged between 0.168-3.09μgwas good. the regression equation was below: y=105417.7x-1115.6, r=0.9995; arerage recovery was 100.53%, rsd=3.38%. conclusion: this method is simple, accurate and convenient.key words tlcs; qingre ming mu ccapsules; emodin修正：determination of emodin content in qingremingmu1 capsulesluo ming-zhu1, zhang hong2 (1.hubei provicial institute of drug control, wuhan 430030, china; 2.the 75310 medical team of the army)abstract objective: to set up a method for the determination （content删去） of emodin content in qingre mingmu capsules. methods: in the tlc assay, a 0.5% canboxymethyl cellulose sodium (was used删去) silica gel gplate and a developing solvent with a mixture of benzene—ethyl formate—formic acid—methanol—water(3:1:0.05:0.1:0.5) as the upper solutionwere used.λs=435nm,λr=530nm. results: a good linear relationship wasfound when the sample amount (which删去) ranged between 0.168-3.09μg （was good删去）. the regression equation was as follows: y=105417.7x-1115.6, r=0.9995.the average rate of recovery was 100.53%, rsd=3.38%. conclusion: the method is simple, convenient and accurate.key words tlc; qingre mingmu ccapsules; emodin点评：1、中成药名用斜体书写，也可译作removing pathogenic heat to improve acuity of vision。3、原文：research on the acute toxicity of huning capsulexin zhi-wei, zang zhi-he, mai xiao-xia, feng jun, yang wan-qing, liao hong-li (teaching and research section of pharmacy, the third medical university, chengdu college of pla 610081, china)abstract objective: to observe and test the acute toxicity of huning capsule on kunming mice after an i.g. methods: count the death cases of mice in 7 days after the i.g. and work out the ld50 of huning capsule. results: the ld50 of huning capsule on mice is 3981mg/kg.key words huning capsule; acute toxicity; ld50修正：an experimental study of the acute toxicity of huning capsules1xin zhi-wei, zang zhi-he, mai xiao-xia, feng jun, yang wan-qing, liao hong-li (teaching and research section of pharmacy, chengdu military medical college, the third military medical university, chengdu 610081, china)abstract objective: to observe and determine the acute toxicity of huning capsules (on kunming mice删去) after a single intragastric administration in the mouse. methods: 50 kunming mice were randomly divided into5 equal groups, with 10 animals in each group. a single dose of 7500, 5630, 4200, 3150 and 2360mg/kg-1 of the content of the capsules were administened through a gastric tube to each of the mice of the 5 groups, respectively. the numbers of the deaths of the mice within 7 days were noted down and the mediar lether dose (ld50) of huning capsules was calculated. (count the death cases of mice in 7 days after the i.g. and work out the ld50 of huning capsule. 删去) results: the ld50 of huning capsule in mice was 3981mg/kg. conclusion: huning capsules have only a minor acute toxicity. it is therefore safe to use the drug clinically. further study of its toxicity in long-term application is required.key words huning capsules; toxicity, acute; ld50点评：1、“呼宁胶囊”也可译作antitussive and antiasthmatic capsules.