Unforgettable Avatar_佳作欣赏
last saturday, i heard the news that avatar was going to go off the line in a week. the film was so popular! it reminded me of the unforgettable memory of watching this film two months ago. i still remembered at that time so many people in guangdong rushed to dongguan only to see the imax 3d avatar.
avatar is full of beautiful scenes and exciting adventures. the story is about like this: in the future world the human need a kind of energy rock to sell for a great amount of money, but they needed to get them from a secret planet called pandora. an army flew to pandora on spaceships and more were coming. they found that the energy rocks were under the home tree of the navis (the native guys). thousands of them were living there! the human wanted to rob all those precious rocks! but they couldn’t breathe freely on a planet without air. they had to make some avatar body by mixing the human dna with the dna of the natives. some of the well trained warriors were going to control them. one of the warriors jake won the trust of the navi’s and his boss wanted him to let the navis move away, or else the human would kill them. but the navis were going to defend their home until the last minute. at this critical moment, jake stood on the navi’s side helping them to fight back all the greedy human. he controlled the magical leonopteryx! at last the navis succeeded and all the bad human went back to the earth and never come back again.
how cruel the human were! they did so many dirty things only for money. the navis were only trying to protect their homeland while the human were trying to destroy it! i don’t want to see any battle ever again. leonopteryx was amazing!!it flew in the sky waving its enormous wings and helped the navis to fight back bravely. i love this film so much not only because of the beautiful scene, but it also made me think a lot.
i am very glad to see your sentence coherence. with this beautiful picture makes your article fascinating. it's good to write down your opinion. keep writing!
avatar is full of beautiful scenes and exciting adventures. the story is about like this: in the future world the human need a kind of energy rock to sell for a great amount of money, but they needed to get them from a secret planet called pandora. an army flew to pandora on spaceships and more were coming. they found that the energy rocks were under the home tree of the navis (the native guys). thousands of them were living there! the human wanted to rob all those precious rocks! but they couldn’t breathe freely on a planet without air. they had to make some avatar body by mixing the human dna with the dna of the natives. some of the well trained warriors were going to control them. one of the warriors jake won the trust of the navi’s and his boss wanted him to let the navis move away, or else the human would kill them. but the navis were going to defend their home until the last minute. at this critical moment, jake stood on the navi’s side helping them to fight back all the greedy human. he controlled the magical leonopteryx! at last the navis succeeded and all the bad human went back to the earth and never come back again.
how cruel the human were! they did so many dirty things only for money. the navis were only trying to protect their homeland while the human were trying to destroy it! i don’t want to see any battle ever again. leonopteryx was amazing!!it flew in the sky waving its enormous wings and helped the navis to fight back bravely. i love this film so much not only because of the beautiful scene, but it also made me think a lot.
i am very glad to see your sentence coherence. with this beautiful picture makes your article fascinating. it's good to write down your opinion. keep writing!